PROPOSED EDIT TO SCRIPT

Amy has made an observation from viewing many repeating scenes from crime thriller genre pieces, generally there is usually a scene where the main character will stand at the top of a large hill looking around, I have indeed agreed that that could in fact be a interesting an potentially dramatic addition. I have suggested that we add in a scene where our main characters both look out towards the scenery and the narration continues to talk about how the case has baffled them and they feel annoyed at the fact that the murders keep continuing.